#4 With a pure heart

12/6/2012

Poem ideas:
Begin with "I am" and introduce yourself to the reader. Maybe describe what you "have had" or have not in your life.
Begin with "I am" and describe who you were, are now, and will be in the future.

8 Comments

Andris Erdős

2/17/2013 05:46:26 am

I am straight and not infidel
I just keep calm and confident
I surely love things you don't do
I'm not a hipster but it is true.

I have faith without religion
I live in the capital region
Seventeen I've had so far
But I don't walk in the dark.

I challenged Satan for a dice
I can't say that he was nice
He took my soul, but I've freed it
It's something that's always needed.

If I'm gonna take steps further
I will get away with murder
I will give my time to create
To in the end just take a break.

Jordyn Molina

3/15/2013 01:52:49 am

I like your rhyming in this poem!

Zackery McMurray

3/16/2013 10:01:33 am

I like the rhyming to this poem. I think you did a great job with. It was very similar to the original poem, which I like.

Hannah Robles

3/17/2013 12:12:56 pm

Do you like to rebel against things?

Megan Ryan

3/17/2013 02:48:52 pm

I love your poem! it is funny yet serious. the contradicting statements used are very alluring and interesting

Hunter Wagner

4/1/2013 12:25:46 pm

What events in life inspired you to write this poem?

Duncan

4/3/2013 09:03:36 am

I like the similarities between yours and Jozsef's poems.

Kylie Kiech

4/24/2013 02:03:04 am

I really enjoy your rhyming and the structure of the poem.

#4 With a pure heart

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