#5 Attila jozsef

12/6/2012

Poem ideas:
Write a poem from the third person point of view. Maybe make it a love or hate poem. What do you like and/or dislike about yourself.

4 Comments

Bálint

3/10/2013 07:54:25 am

Make a war, cause nothing:
That's the human being.
Everybody live for himself
Can't do anything else.

I hate the teacher, the lawyers.
I hate the world, all of the people.
I hate the world, because everywhere is hurt,
People can't cleen their soul, it's dirt.

Duncan

4/3/2013 09:05:17 am

I like your grim outlook on society. I think everyone sometimes feels this way.

Tony

4/23/2013 04:25:18 am

I like how you explain how you truly feel, how things in life really get to you, and how direct this poem is. Well done.

noel mckeever

4/24/2013 02:50:03 am

the perspective reveals so much honesty and truth, i commend your effort.

#5 Attila jozsef

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