I have swum with a jellyfish,
Which cut me,
I was very frightened,
Maybe only me.
Also I've tried to parachuting,
It is not like sitting.
Once I fell down from a horse,
I got a consussion.
I've done rafting in a plastic boat,
It isn't my passion.
However, I have a thought about my future.
I'm waiting for the lion -
First, let him care me,
Second, let him help me,
A finally, let him sit by my side in the end.
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Gabe
3/15/2013 03:17:42 am
do you like to adventure?
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Mackenzie Bielen
3/17/2013 04:52:47 am
Did you really do all that?
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Brandon Bone
3/24/2013 12:38:18 pm
That's a lot of things you have done. Did u enjoy parachuting?
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Emese Berta
2/17/2013 03:08:54 am
No regrets
I've never done any surprising in my life
Though I always want to make thing undone
The craziest things have not come yet
But I don't want a thing to regret
I've drunk couple of shots sometime
But they never kicked me out
I would've turned to drugs, but
I know that is not right
I'm waiting for my change to arrive
Until then, I'm just living, barely alive.
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Shannon Foley
3/17/2013 02:51:20 pm
Your poem is really interesting and well written.
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Cara Huang
3/17/2013 02:51:56 pm
The repetition of certain words is pretty good. I like the feeling you express in your poem.
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Drew Genung
3/17/2013 03:43:56 pm
When writing this greatly written poem, how did the thought of drugs and alcohol come to play in your life ?
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Erika Kispal
2/17/2013 03:23:50 am
I have been feeded by my mum,
Yeah, my mission was smiling while I was young.
Then I studied walking and easy sentences,
Now what could be easier than this?
I have improved and studied by the others
So I've experienced solitude, pain and pleasure.
I've been small, tired, weak and a winner,
It's amazing that we are so multiple.
I have flown far above the surface,
And I've swam under the see.
We should appreciate every single day
And protect our previous treats.
Once I thought I will lose somebody,
The worst thing is waste away in the infinity.
The life is cruel and now I know,
Every moment is as good as gold.
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Shannon Foley
3/17/2013 02:57:50 pm
Do you like to swim? It seems to come up often in your poem.
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Fruzsina Sz
2/18/2013 08:21:45 am
Conjuring myself
I wear pink whatever happens
but I'm not too interested in weapons.
I hate fruits and I heard some legends
I wanna go once to Las Vegas
Sometimes I felt like I'm standing on the top of the world
At home I've got a pigeon but easier just a bird
There are some stories about me that you may heard
But trust me! I'm not gonna say about those a real word
When I don't feel like doing something
I start dancing so I'm just stunning
with my father we like humting
I'll never call you dear or darling.
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Mackenzie Bielen
3/17/2013 04:55:01 am
I liked the words and the flow of the poem. Really nice!
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Will Kelly
3/17/2013 01:32:45 pm
Nicely done it is very fluid and not to long
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Tu
2/19/2013 03:46:42 am
Memories
I have swum in the Pacific Ocean.
The sand was really hot,
so I took my slippers off,
and run through that spot.
I survived a big storm.
We sat in a big plane.
It started to shake,
like a little plastic plane,
whit which a little boy played.
I've been followed by somebody,
somebody who I don't know.
I've been in big cities,
And I want to travel more.
I want to live in Sydney
or anywhere,
where the weather is sunny
and all that jazz.
I don't know what I want
Everyday is similar.
I like eventful days.
We're Far far away,
I heard a nightingale.
What if we were in a fairytale?
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Jordyn
3/15/2013 01:49:26 am
I like the way you explain things in your poem :)
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Michael Clark
3/17/2013 09:48:11 am
I really liked how with your words it put us there with you.
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Drew Genung
3/17/2013 03:49:39 pm
I could picture the events that were happening in the poem while I was reading it. It is truly amazing to see something like that pictured in your head. Awesome poem
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Tu
4/2/2013 06:51:19 am
Hy Jordyn, Michael, and Drew :)
Thank you for reading my poem. I'm glad you like it.
While I was writing this poem I looked for some memories from the past which I wanted to write down.
I had imagined it, then I wrote down which came to my mind. :)
Nikol
2/20/2013 05:10:55 am
Stories
I've had a hamster,
Which was killed by my father,
But in the next morning,
He came home with two sweet.
Once I've tweaked by a medusa,
It was in Tunesia,
It was in the first day,
I screamed like a new-born.
These stories are sad,
But in the same time glad,
I know I'm a silly girl,
But I'm free like a bird.
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Hannah Robles
3/17/2013 12:14:28 pm
Do you like telling stories about experiences you've had?
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Bálint
3/10/2013 07:39:31 am
I haven't had cigars in my jaw.
But a knife stopped at my finger.
I've had a lot of hurt,
I've rescued my teacheron the street.
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